Is she real?
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Is she real?
She, as Persephone,
waits
longing and wistful
billows of hair,
once curled
going limp
She, as Persephone,
is trapped inside,
under, beneath
the wills of others,
and she, as Persephone,
waits
. . .
just a child,
trying to please
and trying to prove
what she feels
is it real?
the mind's oppressing
of body and soul
she, as she feels,
is she real?
waits
longing and wistful
billows of hair,
once curled
going limp
She, as Persephone,
is trapped inside,
under, beneath
the wills of others,
and she, as Persephone,
waits
. . .
just a child,
trying to please
and trying to prove
what she feels
is it real?
the mind's oppressing
of body and soul
she, as she feels,
is she real?
PiperC!- Posts : 770
Join date : 2010-06-15
Age : 29
Location : california
Re: Is she real?
Epic. I don't know if I've ever told you this, but you're a great writer. If I don't comment on your stuff, it's usually because I'm so far beneath you that everything you say goes way over my head. LOL. But yeah. This is really good.
Re: Is she real?
That is so sweet Hannah. But I have no idea how anything I say could go over your head. You are a smart cookie!
PiperC!- Posts : 770
Join date : 2010-06-15
Age : 29
Location : california
Re: Is she real?
Hehe. Thanks. You just write a lot about Greek mythology, and I'm not very familiar with it.
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